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Post  lolmaster88(3) on Mon Apr 21, 2008 7:13 am

Yes, I suck at pivot. And I've only started this thread so theres more to come. Constructive CC will do.


You will find all of my animations on www.youtube.com

But I'll post my newest over here.

Newest




Newer:




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(Thanks fatchicken3 for editing the right arm)

be aware I just updated this thread, so theres not much to see

And yes I am a med beg


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Post  TP on Mon Apr 21, 2008 11:06 am

u have some good cinematics in there, but theres a lot to work on. easing, smoothness, movement, all the basics. check out baha's tutorial on DD, itll open ur eyes. ur about med/high beg. and no, sorry, but ur not a legend.

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not a legend.

Post  Sniper11235 on Thu Apr 24, 2008 12:32 am

not a legend. ur as good as me, just more hard working....
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Post  Kirby on Thu Apr 24, 2008 12:36 am

Agreed with TP, About med/High Beginner, Shakey, stiff, and not alot of easing, BUT I Feel you have potential, So dun give up Very Happy


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I know..

Post  lolmaster88(3) on Thu Apr 24, 2008 7:23 am

Lol, I know I'm not a legend, just that a few noobs think I am... and I've read Baha's tut, and it helped but then again I don't think I've improved
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Post  TP on Thu Apr 24, 2008 11:25 am

dont worry, you'll just get better with practice.

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Post  lolmaster88(3) on Thu May 01, 2008 8:21 am

UPDATE ! (does this count as spam? if it does then yeah, sorry)
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Post  TP on Thu May 01, 2008 7:40 pm

not spam at all.

newest is good, but put a higher number in "shrink frames" when u save the .gif cuz its running slow (it's too big). i cant tell how good it is, its not running smoothly enough.

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Post  lolmaster88(3) on Fri May 02, 2008 8:53 am

Update (once again):


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Post  TP on Fri May 02, 2008 5:53 pm

when the gun blasts, the front of the gun is supposed to go up, not the back. PUT MORE OF THEM IN LINKS, preferably only one acually plays thwe image cuz theyre running too slow now. newest is med-high beg.

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Post  Sniper11235 on Fri May 02, 2008 10:45 pm

you do realize that the bullet that popped out of the gun is actualy the bullet that shud go in ppl? y did it go out the side? and where did u get the stk for muzzle flash?
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Post  lolmaster88(3) on Sat May 03, 2008 4:37 am

Sniper11235 wrote:you do realize that the bullet that popped out of the gun is actualy the bullet that shud go in ppl? y did it go out the side? and where did u get the stk for muzzle flash?

Whoops, lol. I was supposed to make shells Suspect

The muzzle flash was from buzzietia (spelled it right?) bursts. I simply make 2 of them smaller and different colours. So basically I edited it right?
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Post  Elblem on Sat May 03, 2008 1:39 pm

The run was nice and eased, a bit shakey though.
The other one was uneased and a bit stiff.
The gunshot was wobbly, especially the helmet, but the gunshot was sexy :D
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